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Writing a research dissertation or thesis is like writing a novel.
It is a novel that begins with a story about the background to the
research; describing the methods used to establish facts or test
hypotheses and ideas; the results that were observed; and the conclusions
that are drawn. Like the good novel that compels you to read it
from cover to cover, a dissertation should be written so that it
can be read at a refreshing tempo, engaging the reader's undivided
attention. To accomplish this, organise the contents of the dissertation
so that they "flow" smoothly from one aspect to the next,
and take particular care in sentence construction.
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One of the techniques to achieve smooth flow of
contents is to maintain a thread between adjoining
chapters; ensure that each section within a chapter
lead on to the subsequent section; and paragraphs
of sections are connected to each other. A common
practice is to use "joining" words or
sentences, particularly at the end and beginning
of each chapter. A joining sentence at the end of
a chapter tells the reader what to expect, while
one at the beginning of a chapter reminds the reader
of the contents of the previous chapter. Flow and
readability are sometimes used interchangeably,
but while smooth flowing content is readable, readability
does not necessarily mean that the contents are
threaded.
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Flow is interrupted when the reader pauses to ponder
the material. This typically occurs in sections
discussing new concepts, and when making statements
based on interpreted results. Where such areas of
the text are identified, pay extra attention to
the phrasing of the content and be conscientious
in providing clear explanations. When making calculations,
define all the variables (include units where applicable)
and justify all simplifying assumptions. You should
also be fastidious in describing experimental, simulation
and test conditions. Do not presume that the reader
knows what you are trying to do or are familiar
with the techniques that you are employing.
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Material that do not contribute directly to the
discussion; argument; or development of a theme
or idea, also interrupts flow. Such material should
be excluded. If, for the sake of completeness, you
wish to include them, place them in an Appendix
and refer to them in the main text.
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Avoid one sentence paragraphs. Too many and a page
will be filled with numerous gaps, imparting a feeling
of discontinuity with the content. Similarly, avoid
long sentences. Long sentences are difficult to
read, and can obscure an otherwise simple explanation.
Try to keep sentence length to less than two lines,
and at the same time, make appropriate use of punctuation.
Punctuation break a sentence into readable chunks,
reduce ambiguity and, if used wisely, can for increase
effect and emphasis. A word of warning though -
do not apply punctuation at random as they can
change the meaning of a sentence.
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The repeated use of words can make a dissertation
difficult, if not boring, to read. Use a thesaurus
to get synonyms to introduce variety, but make sure
that they are used in the proper context. Do not
employ bombastic words to show how clever you are
with the language. Explanations using commonly encoutered
words are more effective than pompous soundling
but rarely used vocabulary.
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Presentation also plays an important part in giving
the impression of smooth flowing content. The font
size should not be too small, and the line-spacing
should be wide enough. Choose 12-point for Serif
fonts (e.g. Times-Roman, Bookman) and 10-point for
Sans-serif fonts (e.g. Arial, Helvetica, Verdana,
Tahoma). A 1.5 line spacing for both font types
should ensure that the lines are sufficiently far
apart to enhance reading comfort.
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Writing in the "active voice" improves
the reading pace, and hence flow. Take for example,
the following two sentences:
Advanced control improves
plant profitability. (active sentence)
Plant profitability
is improved by advanced control. (passive
sentence)
Although both sentences convey the same message,
the first is more authoritative and positive. In
the active sentence, the emphasis is on "Advanced
control" while the passive sentence emphasises
"Plant profitability". Moreover, the passive
sentence expresses the same information in a round-about
way. Passive expressions have their uses though.
As another example:
Excessive drinking can
cause dementia.
(active sentence)
Dementia can be caused
by excessive drinking.
(passive sentence)
When you do not have strong evidence to support a
statement, express it in the passive voice as the
tone is less assertive. This is a "trick"
adopted usually to avoid getting into sticky arguments
with assessors.
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Now that you have an idea of how to improve the flow of contents
in a dissertation, the next thing to consider is the content of
key chapters.
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